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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table indicates the ratios of monthly household revenue five European countries spend on daily things and entertainment Overall, when we take a look at the table, we can see a number of countries have the same rates, whereas others have different. France, Germany and the UK are spendinh most of the money on Housing with 31 % 33% and 37 %. On the other hand, Turkey and Spain are spending most of the remuneration on Food and drink. However, the former countries' second most spending things are Food and drink with 25 %, 22 % and 27 % respectively, while the second most spending thing of the latter countries is Housing with 20 % and 18 %. Germany, the UK and Turkey are spending 7 %, 11 % and 12 % of money on clothing, even though France and Spain spend only 7 % and 8 %. The last item is Entertainment. Germany and Spain are spending 19 % and 15 % of money on the entertainment, whereas the rest countries spend 13 %, 11 % and 10 % of money on this item.
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spend on daily things and entertainment

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France, Germany and the UK are
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on Housing with 31 % 33% and 37 %.
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most of the remuneration on Food and drink.
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things are Food and drink with 25 %, 22 % and 27 %
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thing of the latter
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is Housing with 20 % and 18 %. Germany, the UK and Turkey are
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7 %, 11 % and 12 % of
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on clothing,
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France and Spain spend
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7 % and 8 %. The last item is Entertainment. Germany and Spain are
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19 % and 15 % of
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on the entertainment, whereas the rest
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spend 13 %, 11 % and 10 % of
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IELTS academic The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment.

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6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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