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The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make...

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The picture makes differentiation of the structure of a science park between 2008 and the present time. Overall, what stands out from the picture is that the present structure of the park has changed a lot, especially in the southeast and northwest part. To begin, in 2008, in the northwest corner there was a grassland, while at the current time a research and development center is built. Next to it, the reception is replaced with the university hub and the office is in the same place. In addition, in the northeast corner cycle path is made alongside the road. Moreover, business units and the car park are in the right position but the space of the car park is reduced and shape like a square. Furthermore, a cycle path is added with every road except the curve road in the east, what more, the station is removed and the IT center is turned into an innovation center. According to the past diagram, the cyber security center was in a square shape but at present, it is bigger than the previous and the shape is now like L. Between the innovation and cyber security center there is a path that connects the three places.
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differentiation of the structure of a science
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park
between 2008 and the present time.

Overall
, what stands out from the picture is that the present structure of the
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park
has
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changed
a lot,
especially
in the southeast and northwest part.

To
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begin
, in 2008, in the northwest corner there was a grassland, while at the
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current
time a research and development center
is built
.
Next
to it, the reception
is replaced
with the university hub and the office is in the same place.
In addition
, in the northeast corner cycle path
is made
alongside the road.
Moreover
, business units and the car
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park
are in the right position
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but
the space of the car
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park
is
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reduced
and shape like a square.
Furthermore
, a cycle path is
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added
with every road except the curve road in the east, what more, the station
is removed
and the IT center
is turned
into an innovation center. According to the past diagram, the cyber security center was in a square shape
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but
at present, it is bigger than the previous and the shape is
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like L. Between the innovation and cyber security center there is a path that connects the three places.
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IELTS academic The maps below show a science park in 2008 and the same park today

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