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The maps below show a rural town as it was 1983 and as it is now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The maps below show a rural town as it was 1983 and as it is now. o5wxX
The provided two maps illustrate changes in village. The data is given for 38-year period with focus on 1983 and until this day, in particular 2021. Overall, one part of map was changed into accomodations. Another part of the map was changed into many convenient buildings for local people. The forest which was located in the North-West part of the map was converted into houses with the main aim of accomodating more people in them. Also the new road, namely High road, was constructed among the houses. In general, there were 14 accomodations In the South part of the map, a school, a post office, a police station and a windmill remained constant. The farm which is situated in the Nort-south part of the map was reconstructed into two buildings, such as petrol station and cafe. In the North, a Damn was emerged near the River May. Furthermore, a shop was altered into a big supermarket
The provided two
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people
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was located
in the North-West
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part
of the
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was converted
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houses
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accomodating
more
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people
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High road,
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houses
.
In general
, there were 14
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accomodations


In the South
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, a school, a post office, a police station and a windmill remained constant. The farm which
is situated
in the
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Nort-south
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was reconstructed
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cafe
. In the North, a Damn
was emerged
near the River May.
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, a shop
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big
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IELTS academic The maps below show a rural town as it was 1983 and as it is now.

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