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The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevent.

The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today. 2l1Kk
The two maps illustrate that the development from ten years ago to the present day in this center. It can be seen from the maps that the center has been modified. Ten years ago, when people pass thought the entrance, in south-west, the reception be faced first and coffee bar and toilets just next door. There was a hall which seats for 100 in the middle of cencter. Up of the hall was storage, garden and car park be built in west side. In north-east of this area, be divided in to four office sectors. Otherwise another storage uder the office and do did kitchen. Nowadays, it is of note the area of left hand joined into one, for constructed café area, except for kitchen. The storage on the top shared half place to set up toilets. Moreover, garden be replaced by indoor sports. Lastly, office scale be reduced and removed to the place which was coffee bar in past.
The two maps illustrate that the development from ten years ago to the present day in this center. It can be
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seen
from the maps that the center has
been modified
.

Ten years ago, when
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people
pass
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thought
the entrance, in south-west, the reception
be faced
first
and coffee bar and toilets
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just
next
door. There was a hall which seats for 100 in the middle of
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cencter
. Up of the hall was storage, garden and car park
be built
in west side. In north-east of this area,
be divided
Did you mean "into" (or 'in two')?
in to
four office sectors.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Otherwise
another storage
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uder
the office and do
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "do"?
did
kitchen.

Nowadays, it is of note the area of
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left
hand
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joined
into one, for constructed café area,
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except for
kitchen. The storage on the top shared half place to set up toilets.
Moreover
, garden
be replaced
by indoor sports.
Lastly
, office scale be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
and removed to the place which was coffee bar
Did you mean: "in the past"?
in past
.
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IELTS academic The maps below show a community center 10 years ago and the same center today.

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