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The map shows the paln of medical centre during 2008 and 2010

The map shows the paln of medical centre during 2008 and 2010 J3695
Respecting to this map depicts the information regarding the layout of medical centre in 2008 and 2010To embark on, in 2008, the treatment room was remained constant at north east corner but there were only three doctors office but in 2010, which was reduced the size and added one doctor office and store room at southern side. Furthermore, in 2010, there were newly eracted education room and mother and child room towards the south west side. In addition, they were built pharmacy store that located between storeroom and laboratory at the east side. Moreover, the entrance at the south side and centre of the waiting area, staff office, reception and corridor were remained unchanged over a period of 2 years. Overall, the new medical center was widely changed and the size of the medical centre same but some new amenitie have been included within two years
Respecting to this map depicts the information regarding the layout of medical
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centre
in 2008 and 2010To embark on, in 2008, the treatment
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room
was remained
constant at
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north east
corner
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but
there were
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only
three doctors office
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but
in 2010, which was
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reduced
the size and
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added
one doctor office and store
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room
at southern side.
Furthermore
, in 2010, there were
newly
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eracted
education
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room
and mother and child
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room
towards the
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south west
side.
In addition
, they
were built
pharmacy store that located between storeroom and laboratory at the east side.
Moreover
, the entrance at the south side and
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centre
of the waiting area, staff office, reception and corridor
were remained
unchanged over a period of 2 years.
Overall
, the new medical center was
widely
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changed
and the size of the medical
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centre
same
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but
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some
new
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amenitie
have
been included
within two years
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IELTS academic The map shows the paln of medical centre during 2008 and 2010

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