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The map shows the changes in island from 1995 to present.

The map shows the changes in island from 1995 to present. QK7OX
The maps compare the evolution in a particular island between 1995 to current scenario. Overall, majority of changes took place in western side of the island and it is clear that the island is modernized for better living standard of civilians. To begin with, in 1995, the island had a forest in north-east corner which is converted in golf course today. Following to this, forest park is also cut down and tennis court constructed there. Moreover, hotel of eastern side remained but they introduced new car park next to it. Additionally, cafe` as well remained opposite to hotel. Apart from this, sea included fishing port in 1995 which was demolished in present day. In front of the sea fish market replaced by accommodation area. Furthermore, opposite to apartments restaurant is build up in a place which was previously occupied by the shops. Interestingly, number of houses is increased in western side of the island owing to the significant growth of population.
The maps compare the evolution in a particular
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island
between 1995 to
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current
scenario.

Overall
,
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majority of
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changes
took place in western side of the
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island
and it is
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clear
that the
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island
is modernized
for better living standard of civilians.

To
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begin
with, in 1995, the
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island
had a forest in north-east corner which
is converted
in golf course
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today
. Following to this, forest park is
also
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cut
down and tennis court constructed there.
Moreover
, hotel of eastern side remained
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but
they introduced new car park
next
to it.
Additionally
,
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cafe
`
as well
remained opposite to hotel. Apart from this, sea included fishing port in 1995 which
was demolished
in present day. In front of the sea fish market replaced by accommodation area.

Furthermore
, opposite to apartments restaurant is build up in a place which was previously occupied by the shops.
Interestingly
, number of
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houses
is increased
in western side of the
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island
owing to the significant growth of population.
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