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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. RgVP
The two maps illustrate the development of the city’s hospital road entrance in the years 2007 and 2010. By 2007, City Hospital was reached through Hospital Road from the southern part of the building. At the eastern section of this road, there was a parking slot which was provided both for hospital employees and citizens. In addition, the people who used bus could take off at the bus station on the east part of the hospital staff and public car park. Three years later, City Hospital’s area was not transformed significantly. Although the hospital’s entrance main point still from the south, this area was modified as such a connector for two roundabouts. These features have also functioned as the primary access to a new bus station that was moved from the northeast region. Besides, the former bus stop area has changed into a public car park that was already separated from the hospital staff which was preserved in the former location.
The two maps illustrate the development of the city’s
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hospital
road entrance in the years 2007 and 2010.

By 2007, City
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Hospital
was reached
through
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Hospital
Road from the southern part of the building. At the eastern section of this road, there was a parking slot which
was provided
both for
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hospital
employees and citizens.
In addition
, the
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people
who
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used
bus could take off at the bus station on the east part of the
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hospital
staff and public car park.

Three years later, City
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Hospital’s
area was not transformed
significantly
. Although the
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hospital’s
entrance main point
still
from the south, this area
was modified
as such a connector for two roundabouts. These features have
also
functioned as the primary access to a new bus station that was
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moved
from the northeast region.
Besides
, the former bus
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stop
area has
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changed
into a public car park that was already separated from the
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hospital
staff which
was preserved
in the former location.

IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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