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The tables above show sales of fair trade coffee and bananas in five countries in Europe in 1999 and 2004. Write a report of at least 150 words summarising the main details and making comparisons where relevant.

The tables above show sales of fair trade coffee and bananas in five countries in Europe in 1999 and 2004. Write a report of at least 150 words summarising the main details and making comparisons where relevant. WJ8e
The tables present sales data for fair trade coffee and bananas in five European nations in two years: 1999 and 2004. Overall, it can be seen that coffee sales increased in all countries between 1999 and 2004. On the other hand, while sales of bananas climbed in three of the countries, they fell in Belgium and Sweden. In 1999, Switzerland had the most coffee sales, with a figure of 3 million euros. Moreover, by 2004, this number had doubled to 6 million. However, in 2004, the UK was the country with the highest level of coffee sales at 20 million euros, which was a massive increase from 1. 5 million in 1999. The remaining countries had similar coffee sales to the UK in 1999, but only had increases of a few hundred thousand euros over the next five years. As for the sale of bananas, this time the UK was the biggest buyer in both years and it sales also grew by three times from 15 million to 47 million euros. Switzerland and Denmark also had significant growth in sales, climbing from 1 million to 5. 5 million and from 0. 6 million to 4 million. Finally, sales of bananas in Belgium and Sweden declined by about a half from around 2 million to around 1 million euros.
The tables present
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data for
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and bananas in five European nations in two years: 1999 and 2004.

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, it can be
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coffee
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increased in all
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countries
between 1999 and 2004.
On the other hand
, while
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of bananas climbed in three of the
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, they fell in Belgium and Sweden.

In 1999, Switzerland had the most
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coffee
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sales
, with a figure of 3
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million
euros.
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, in 2004, the UK was the
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country
with the highest level of
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at 20
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euros, which was a massive increase from 1. 5
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in 1999. The remaining
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had similar
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coffee
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sales
to the UK in 1999,
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had increases of a few hundred thousand euros over the
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five years.

As for the
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of bananas, this time the UK was the biggest buyer in both years and
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also
grew by three times from 15
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to 47
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euros. Switzerland and Denmark
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, climbing from 1
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to 5. 5
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and from 0. 6
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Finally
,
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of bananas in Belgium and Sweden declined by about a half from around 2
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to around 1
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IELTS academic The tables above show sales of fair trade coffee and bananas in five countries in Europe in 1999 and 2004. Write a report of at least 150 words summarising the main details and making comparisons where relevant.

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