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The map shows the development of island from 1995 to present

The map shows the development of island from 1995 to present BLoQ6

The pictures compare the changes taking place in the island from the year of 1995 to current days. Overall, it is evident form the comparison that the majority of development took place in the eastern side of the town and it is clear that town is modernized for better living standard of civilians. To begin with, in 1995, the island had farm land and forest park on the top right corner, which is now convented into golf course and tennis ground. Moreover, there was number of houses built in 1995. However, new days are constructed in present days. Furthermore, the hotel near to main road has remain intact and the carpark is introduce just beside the hotel. Apart from this, the shops in residental area are now converted into restaurant. Likewise, the fish market just beside the sea area is replaced with apartments. Consequently, the fishing port is demolished due to water pollution.

The pictures compare the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 taking place The usual preposition for "island" is "on" not "in".  Revise: "on the island".on the island
in the island
 from the year of 1995 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 days.

Overall
, it is evident form the comparison that the majority of development took place in the eastern side of the town and it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that town is modernized
 for better living standard of civilians.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, in 1995, the island had farm land and forest park The usual prepositions to use with a corner "in" not "on". Did you mean "in the top right corner"?in the top right corner
on the top right corner
, which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
Possible spelling mistake found.convertedconvenedconsentedcontentedcon vented
convented
 into golf course and tennis ground. Moreover
, there was number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 built in 1995. However
, new days are constructed
 in present days. Furthermore
, the hotel near to main road has Use past participle here: "remained".remained
remain
 intact and the Possible spelling mistake found.car parkcarp ark
carpark
 is Consider using a past participle here: "introduced".introduced
introduce
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 beside the hotel.

Apart from this, the shops in Possible spelling mistake found.residential
residental
 area are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 converted into restaurant. Likewise
, the fish market This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 beside the sea area is replaced
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
with apartments. Consequently
, the fishing port is demolished
 due to water pollution. 