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The map shows the changes in island from 1995 to present. Write a report to university lecturer. Write at least 150 words.

The map shows the changes in island from 1995 to present. Write a report to university lecturer. m9Mpr
The maps compare the developments taken place in Island between 1995 to current day. Over all, it is clearly evident from the comparison that all the elements of island had experienced several changes except hotel and cafe. To commence with, majority of changes taken Place in northern east corher. In addition, farm land was present there and forest park was situated just below of that in 1995, which has been converted in to golf and tennis courts sequentially. Besides this, housing colony has been expanded in north-east side compared to 1995. similarly, new houses. are added in west part of island with good facility. Furthermore, fishing scite was present in South part of island which has been completely vanished now. Just above that, lefthand side fish market is replaced by apostments. Opposite side of apartments restaurants has been Introduced by replacing shops. While, in eastern part hotel and cafe are remained unchange. However, new car pack Perk is erected at right hand side of hotel.
The maps compare the developments taken place in
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Island
between 1995 to
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current
day.

Over all, it is
clearly
evident from the comparison that all the elements of
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island
had experienced several
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changes
except hotel and
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cafe
. To commence with,
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majority of
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changes
taken Place in northern east
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corher
.
In addition
, farm land was present there and forest park
was situated
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just
below of that in 1995, which has
been converted
in to golf and tennis courts
sequentially
.
Besides
this, housing colony has
been expanded
in north-east side compared to 1995.
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similarly
, new
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houses
.
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are
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added
in west part of
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island
with
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good
facility.

Furthermore
, fishing
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scite
was present in South part of
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island
which has been

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completely
vanished
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now
.
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Just
above that,
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lefthand
side fish market
is replaced
by

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apostments
. Opposite side of apartments restaurants has
been Introduced
by replacing shops. While, in eastern part hotel and
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cafe
are remained
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unchange
.
However
, new car pack Perk
is erected
at
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right hand
side of hotel.
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IELTS academic The map shows the changes in island from 1995 to present. Write a report to university lecturer.

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