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The map shows office building present nad future plan.

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The given maps compare the appearance of office building from present and future plan. Overall, the major changes are built mass of office blocks while the storerooms is remain unchanged. From present plan of building, the entrance is situated on south east direction next to four office blocks. There are two grasa area in West amd East direction respectively. The kitchen and canteen are located in North side where the storeroom near the Wcs block. To appearance from future office plan, the most expwcted office blocks will built in future plan. The kitchen and canteen are removed and the office. Block will be wrected. The main entrance will be shiftwd at centre of south direction. The storeroom and the entrance of grass will remained same. The both side of grass land are demolished and the outdoor seating area and coffee machines will be put West and East direction respectively. The last predected the two storerooms will be built near to main entrance by removing the four storerooms.
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office
building from present and future
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plan
.
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, the major
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changes
are built
mass of
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office
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blocks
while the
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storerooms
is
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remain
unchanged.

From present
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plan
of building, the
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entrance
is situated
on
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south east
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direction
next
to four
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office
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blocks
. There are two
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grasa
area in West
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amd
East
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direction
respectively
. The kitchen and canteen
are located
in North side where the
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storeroom
near the
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Wcs
block.

To appearance from future
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office
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plan
, the most
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expwcted
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office
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blocks
will built in future
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plan
. The kitchen and canteen
are removed
and the
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office
.
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Block
will be
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wrected
. The main
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entrance
will be
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shiftwd
at
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centre
of south
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direction
. The
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storeroom
and the
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entrance
of grass will
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remained
same.
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The
both side of grass land
are demolished
and the outdoor seating area and coffee machines will
be put
West and East
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direction
respectively
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The
last
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predected
the two
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storerooms
will
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near to main
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entrance
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storerooms
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IELTS academic The map shows office building present nad future plan.

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