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The diagram highlights the changes to the area around Cuthbert’s Lighthouse between 1965 and today.

The diagram highlights the changes to the area around Cuthbert’s Lighthouse between 1965 and today. YkAnV
The map provides information on the modifications had been done to the Cuthbert’s Lighthouse land space since 1965. Overall, Transportation facility has been constructed and built brand-new Holiday campsite, a local food shop and 100 parking slots to the West. In 1965, There was track to the Cuthbert’s Light house and there was a small house at end. There was a huge farmland to the South-East. At present, Main road has been developed from South-West to North-east along with the new vehicle parking facility with 100 slots. Farmland which was located to the South-East converted into Holiday campsite and Local food shop. The house which was at the end of the track has been removed at the cost of the development of main road.
The map provides information on the modifications had
been done
to the Cuthbert’s Lighthouse land space since 1965.

Overall
, Transportation facility has
been constructed
and built brand-new Holiday campsite, a local food shop and 100 parking slots to the West.

In 1965, There was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
to the Cuthbert’s Light
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
and there was a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
. There was a huge farmland to the South-East.

At present, Main road has
been developed
from South-West to North-east along with the new vehicle parking facility with 100 slots. Farmland which
was located
to the South-East converted into Holiday campsite and Local food shop. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
which was at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
track
has
been removed
at the cost of the development of main road.

IELTS academic The diagram highlights the changes to the area around Cuthbert’s Lighthouse between 1965 and today.

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