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Summerise and report main features of the maps

Summerise and report main features of the maps 9BO7x
The two maps display the infrastructure of an island before and after construction. Overall, there have been many significant changes occurred in the island, while it became as a highly populated area. Earlier, island was a bare land with small palm trees and a beech, which was located in the west side. After the developmental process, infrastructure has changed completely. A restaurant has been built in the north side of the island, which is connected to the separate reception building near to the entrance. Also there are two accommodation colonies built in the each side of the reception and they are connected by small paths. All small paths were connected to the vehicle track which is arising from the entrance. There is a pier from the entrance, where the boats are tied. And the beach has been modified for swimming. However there is no any changes in the palm tree population. The island has become a populated area with many facilities.
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before
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Overall
, there have been
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many
significant
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changes
occurred in the
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island
, while it became as a
highly
populated area.

Earlier,
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island
was a bare land with
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small
palm trees and a beech, which
was located
in the west side.

After the developmental process, infrastructure has
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changed
completely. A restaurant has
been built
in the north side of the
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island
, which
is connected
to the separate reception building near to the entrance.
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Also
there are two accommodation colonies built in
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the each
side of the
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reception and
they
are connected
by
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small
paths. All
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small
paths
were connected
to the vehicle
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track
which is arising from the entrance. There is a pier from the entrance, where the boats
are tied
. And the beach has
been modified
for swimming.
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However
there is
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no
any
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changes
in the palm tree population.

The
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island
has become a populated area with
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many
facilities.

IELTS academic Summerise and report main features of the maps

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