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the process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company

the process below shows the Human Resources (HR) recruitment process for a company gqQpg

The diagram explains the process of recruitment employees by Human Resources in the company. There are total of seven main stages in the process, beginning with planning the list of job requirements and finishing with the applicable success or receive a email reject the applicant. To begin, the Human Resources will make a list of requirement for position in the company and spread the job scripts through various media to attract potential staffs. When the application form will be downloaded by the candidate who have to fill in complete the form, it will submitted to the Human Resources in the company by different ways. After the application successfully assessed, the employers will determines and seeks for the appropriate candidates. Subsequently, the applicants who pass the application form will be invited to the interview while if not, the HR will sent an email about the rejection form. Following the interview, the employees are divided into two groups that are achieve enrollment and reject application. The achieve enrollment stages consist of the successful applicant and runner-up selected as well as offered for the job whereas the reject applicant will be collected refuse email for the application.

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