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The map shown the changed in Springfield primary school between 2005 and 2015.

The map shown the changed in Springfield primary school between 2005 and 2015. BaQWV

The provided maps illustrate the modification of Springfield primary school. The information is given for 2005 and 2015 year. Overall, it can be seen that the maximum changed have taken place on the North Eastside. While the least change occurred on the southside. Looking at the map in detail, in 2005, the portable classrooms had taken place on the Northside, but it will be converted into three classrooms as C4, C5, and C6 in 2015. However, there was no innovation on the north side, and they were as it is before they had throughout the period. In contrast, on the south side, the facilities of toilets for boys and girls and main office remained as it is between 2005 and 2015 years. Amazing the other sides, the direction of the south side-east side, the area of library was removed by the principal's office in one decade period. Nevertheless, the land of the library was extended from the southeast side to the northeast side. On the other hand, the facility of gym was established on the west south side along with two entrances, one entrance was on the north side and other was on the south side.

The provided maps illustrate the modification of Springfield primary school. The information is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 for 2005 and 2015 year.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the maximum This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 have taken place on the North Eastside. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 the least This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 occurred on the Possible spelling mistake found.Southsidesouth side
southside
.

Looking at the map in detail, in 2005, the portable classrooms had taken place on the Northside, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it will be converted
 into three classrooms as C4, C5, and C6 in 2015. However
, there was no innovation on the north side, and they were as it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 they had throughout the period. In contrast
, on the south side, the facilities of toilets for boys and girls and main office remained as it is between 2005 and 2015 years.

Amazing the other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorbottomtopsurfacehandpart
sides
, the direction of the south side-east side, the area of library was removed
 by the principal's office in one decade period. Nevertheless
, the land of the library was extended
 from the southeast side to the northeast side. On the other hand
, the facility of gym was established
 on the west south side along with two entrances, one entrance was on the north side and other was on the south side. 