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The map show the changes in the area in different three years.

The map show the changes in the area in different three years. XnRNE
The map depicts the information about changes discern in Meadowside village and Fonton in neighboring town in 1962, 1982 and on current time. It can be clearly seen that plethora of facilities manufacture until a current period. Taking a closer look, in 1962 shape occupied by Meadow side village and fonton were just in limited area. Coming towards 1985 as far fonton size rose up in same period of time meadow side village were facilited with housing estate, leisure complex and super store, . whereas road built from meadows side village to fonton. Empty shape between both the place were transfigure into hotel, station and toward south business park built goes with road facilities in current time. To wrap up, several of development goes over the years undeveloped area were converted through buildings.
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Meadowside
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in neighboring town in 1962, 1982 and on
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current
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clearly
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that plethora of facilities manufacture until a
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period. Taking a closer look, in 1962 shape occupied by Meadow side
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village
and
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fonton
were
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in limited area. Coming towards 1985 as far
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fonton
size rose up in same period of time meadow side
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were
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facilited
with housing estate, leisure complex and super store
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whereas
road built from meadows side
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village
to
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fonton
. Empty shape between both the place
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were
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into hotel, station and toward south business park built goes with road facilities in
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current
time.

To wrap up, several of development goes over the years undeveloped area
were converted
through buildings.
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