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the chart shows the value of one country's export

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The chart illustrates the different groups of one country's exports from 2015 to 2016. The table represents changes in every type of exports in percentage value between 2015 and 2016. Overall, bar chart has two groups, one group is more than 5o billions dollars another under than 5o billions dollars. The first group contains categories such as Petroleum products and engineered goods, in second. are gems and jewellery, agricultural products and textiles. Table has dramatical changes in Engineered goods and textiles types of export, another types have some changes during one year. Picture with chart shows that fuel products are increased smaller than in engineered goods category. Engineered goods grew up upper than 6o billion dollars. Gems and jewellery is one category that decreased export earnings. Agricultural products were constant during 2015 and 2016. Textile type of export rocketed. Engineered goods and Textiles grew up, they increased 8. 5% and textiles category dramatically increased by 15, 24%. It was the biggest changes around all export's categories. Petroleum products went up only 3%. Agricultural products had one of the smallest changes, it could be say like constant (0, 81%) In 5 group off export, only one had fall, it was gems and jewellery (5. 18%)
The chart illustrates the
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of one country's
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exports
from 2015 to 2016. The table represents
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in every
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of
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exports
in percentage value between 2015 and 2016.

Overall
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, one
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is more than 5o billions dollars another under than 5o billions dollars. The
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such as Petroleum
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, in second.
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gems and
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textiles
. Table has
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during one year.

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.
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grew up upper than 6o billion dollars. Gems and
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is one
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that decreased
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earnings. Agricultural
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were constant during 2015 and 2016.
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rocketed.

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grew up, they increased 8. 5% and
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increased by 15, 24%. It was the biggest
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around all
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export's
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. Petroleum
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went up
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3%. Agricultural
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had one of the smallest
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, it could be say like constant (0, 81%) In 5
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