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The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 1aRRq
This picture depicts the generation of energy through the solar panels which can be utilized to provide electricity for local purpose. To begin with, the panels which are instilled on top of houses are used to absorb the energy from sun and converts it into DC current. After that there is inverter on the other side of wall which transforms the DC current to the AC current and measures the electricity and production. Afterwards, electrical panel which is right to the next of panel distributes the power to homes. Additionally there is an uitlity meter which takes incharge and used to retransfer the excess amount of solar energy to the grid with the help of the meter. This is very useful element in the process because if there is any high voltage it takes care of it. Finally, the tall poll which is outside the house is called utility grid which provides electricity when you exceed the amount produced by the solar panel.
This picture depicts the generation of energy through the solar
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panels
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to provide electricity for local purpose.

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panels
which
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on top of
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houses
are
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used
to absorb the energy from sun and converts it into DC
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current
. After that there is inverter on the other side of wall which transforms the DC
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current
to the AC
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current
and measures the electricity and production.

Afterwards, electrical
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panel
which is right to the
next
of
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panel
distributes the power to homes.
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uitlity
meter which takes
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incharge
and
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retransfer
the excess amount of solar energy to the grid with the
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help
of the meter. This is
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very
useful element in the process
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because
if there is any high voltage it takes care of it.

Finally
, the tall poll which is outside the
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house
is called
utility grid which provides electricity when you exceed the amount produced by the solar
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panel
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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