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The map outlines plan of a proposed supermarket in Garlsdon with two possible locations.

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The map outlines plan of a proposed supermarket in Garlsdon with two possible locations. Overall, it is clear that, while site one is located outside the town, site two is located within the town. Garlsdon is a town which is neighboring with three other places such as Bransdon, Cransdon and Hindon, with population of 65000. Regarding first location, which was located in the country side. Railway and main roads are passing to the sides of the plot. When considering surrounding of the site, in the north side Hindon remains at about 12km away. Similarly, in the East side is covered by industrial area. The second plot, which is positioned exactly in the town Centre, but which is no traffic zone. However, it is near to housing facilities and adjacent to both Cransdon and Bransdon which are about, 25 and 16 km away respectively. Finally, it can be seen that a railway line is passing through the town Centre.
The map outlines plan of a proposed supermarket in
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Garlsdon
with two possible locations.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that, while site one
is located
outside the
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town
, site two
is located
within the town.

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Garlsdon
is a
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town
which is neighboring with three other places such as
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Bransdon
,
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Cransdon
and
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Hindon
, with population of 65000. Regarding
first
location, which
was located
in the country side. Railway and main roads are passing to the
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sides
of the plot. When considering surrounding of the site, in the north side
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Hindon
remains at about
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12km
away.
Similarly
, in the East side
is covered
by industrial area.

The second plot, which
is positioned
exactly in the
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town
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Centre
,
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but
which is no traffic zone.
However
, it is near to
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housing
facilities and adjacent to both
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Cransdon
and
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Bransdon
which are about, 25 and 16 km away
respectively
.
Finally
, it can be
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seen
that a railway line is passing through the
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town
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Centre
.
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IELTS academic The map outlines plan of a proposed supermarket in Garlsdon with two possible locations.

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