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The map illustrates two proposed sites to build a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.

The map illustrates two proposed sites to build a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. 7P7D5
In overview, the suggested site one for the mall is closer to the housing estate, the city center and lies in between the river, the road and the railway while site two is close proximity of the industrial estate and the city center, it is surrounded by two roads and a railway. The proposed site for shopping mall in the towards the north of the city is surrounded by the housing estate on the northwest side, the river flows around the mall from south to north, the railway lines run from northwest to northeast, city center lay behind the railway lines with the golf course beyond the road behind the railway line. The second suggested site for the mall is on the southeast end of Brandfield. It is surrounded by the railway line that ends on the border of the city at one side and two roads, one of them takes passes from inside the city, connecting city center, the gold course, housing estate and proposed site one and ending at the north east border. , whereas the second road passes from the industrial estate and finishes just above the eastern part of the city.
In overview, the suggested
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site
one for the
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mall
is closer to the housing
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estate
, the city center and lies in between the river, the
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road
and the
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railway
while
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site
two is
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close proximity
of the industrial
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estate
and the city center, it
is surrounded
by two
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roads
and a railway.

The proposed
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site
for shopping
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mall
in the towards the north of the city
is surrounded
by the housing
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estate
on the northwest side, the river flows around the
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mall
from south to north, the
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railway
lines run from northwest to northeast, city center lay behind the
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railway
lines with the golf course beyond the
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road
behind the
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railway
line.

The second suggested
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site
for the
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mall
is on the southeast
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Brandfield
. It
is surrounded
by the
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railway
line that ends on the border of the city at one side and two
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roads
, one of them takes passes from inside the city, connecting city center, the
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gold
course, housing
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estate
and proposed
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site
one and ending at the
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north east
border.
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whereas the second
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road
passes from the industrial
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estate
and finishes
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just
above the eastern part of the city.
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IELTS academic The map illustrates two proposed sites to build a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield.

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