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graphs and charts of education within male and female

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The chart illustrates the trend in male and female students in Britain when pursuing further studies over three time periods from1970 to 1991. The type of education has been further divided as full time and part time. The highest number of male students who were engaged in part time education can be found in years 1970-1971 while the female students report the highest number in partial education within 1990-1991. The numbers were reached 1000 in both cases and female students have exceeded even that. Full time education has been received mostly around 1990-1991 by both genders which was around 200. When studying the chart, we are able to perceive that part time education is more popular than full time education among both ladies and gents. While there are around 1000 part time students over the years, the full timers have not exceeded 200 at least once. The number of men who followed part time education has decreased in 1980 but has slightly improved again on 1990, while the number of part time female students has gradually increased. Full time education has also risen up within the years for both genders.
The chart illustrates the trend in male and
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female
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students
in Britain when pursuing
further
studies over three
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time
periods from1970 to 1991. The type of
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education
has been
further
divided as
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full
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time
and
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part time
.

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The
highest
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number
of male
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students
who
were engaged
in
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part
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time
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education
can
be found
in years 1970-1971 while the
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female
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students
report the highest
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number
in partial
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education
within 1990-1991.
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The
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numbers
were reached
1000 in both cases and
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female
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students
have exceeded even that.
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Full
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time
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education
has
been received
mostly
around 1990-1991 by both genders which was around 200.

When studying the chart, we are able to perceive that
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part
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time
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education
is more popular than
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full
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time
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education
among both ladies and gents. While there are around 1000
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part
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time
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students
over the years, the
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full timers
have not exceeded 200 at least once. The
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number
of
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men
who followed
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education
has decreased in 1980
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improved
again on 1990, while the
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students
has
gradually
increased.
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Full
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education
has
also
risen up within the years for both genders.
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