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The map illustrates the information about the changes in Stokeford over the period from 1930 to 2010.

The map illustrates the information about the changes in Stokeford over the period from 1930 to 2010. o52mD
The map illustrates the information about the changes in Stokeford over the period from 1930 to 2010. Overall, the significant changes are the emergence of houses in 2010. In 1930, there were a few houses that were constructed surrounding 1 part of the main road, but the latter time the village added a myriad of accommodation along the main road for their inhabitants. Besides, the farmlands which one of them had original location was to the southwest of the main road and the other located next to the bridge, 2010 all of them were removed and alternative by houses. In addition, the shops located in front of the Primary school were demolished and built up the extra roads in the later stage, and there was one road was led to the large house which was transformed into a retirement house. Moreover, the primary school was enlarged with 2 new constructions, whereas the post office was remained unchanged throughout the period given.
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Stokeford
over the period from 1930 to 2010.

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changes
are the emergence of
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in 2010.

In 1930, there were a few
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that
were constructed
surrounding 1 part of the main
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road
,
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the latter time the village
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added
a myriad of accommodation along the main
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road
for their inhabitants.
Besides
, the farmlands which one of them had original location was to the southwest of the main
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road
and the other located
next
to the bridge, 2010 all of them
were removed
and alternative by
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houses
.
In addition
, the shops located in front of the Primary school
were demolished
and built up the extra
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roads
in the later stage, and there was one
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was led
to the large
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house
which
was transformed
into a retirement
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house
.
Moreover
, the primary school
was enlarged
with 2 new constructions, whereas the post office
was remained
unchanged throughout the period
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given
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