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The map illustrate 3 locations for building a new leisure sentre.

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The map illustrate 3 locations for building a new leisure sentre. Overall, the map shows 3 main locations. Its; A, B, C. The place which shown is unpopulated with people and 2 of locations are replaced near the river. Firstly, the location A is located on the right side of the river. The building looks like a factory which produce a gas. On the above tooke place a B construction wich looks as high rise complex. It has two roads which around it and one of them goes on the factory. On the right sight it seen a stepp and on the left a river The C location has much more place around than previesly two. It clearly that it replaced on the bump. On the right side it has a lot of tries and river. The last place replaced further from them.
The map illustrate 3
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locations
for building a new leisure
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sentre
.

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, the map
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shows
3 main
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locations
. Its; A, B, C. The
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place
which shown
is unpopulated
with
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people
and 2 of
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locations
are replaced
near the river.

Firstly
, the
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location
A
is located
on the right side of the river. The building looks like a factory which produce a gas.

On the above
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tooke
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place
a B construction
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wich
looks as high rise complex.

It has two roads which around it and one of them goes on the factory. On the right sight it
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seen
a
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stepp
and on the
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left
a
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river


The C
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location
has much more
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place
around than
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previesly
two. It
clearly
that it replaced on the bump. On the right side it has
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a lot of
tries and river. The last
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replaced
further
from them.

IELTS academic The map illustrate 3 locations for building a new leisure sentre.

Academic
  American English
6 paragraphs
143 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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