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The table illustrates the cost spent by consumers in three different categories in 2002 in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey.

The table illustrates the cost spent by consumers in three different categories in 2002 in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey. 73lx5
The table illustrates the cost spent by consumers in three different categories in 2002 in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey. It is clear from the data that most money was spent on food, drinks, and tobacco, while the lowest money was spent on leisure and education for all countries. Turkey remained the top spender for food, drink, and tobacco as well as for leisure and education. In terms of food, drinks, and tobacco, Turkey and Ireland were accounted for the highest spending with just over 32% and just under 29% respectively, whereas, consumer of Spain spent the lowest which stood at almost 19%. Turning back to leisure and education, the contribution of consumers from Spain, Ireland, Italy, and Sweden were at nearly 2%, more than 2%, just over 3%, and just above 3% respectively, while Turkey took the top position with nearly 4. 5%. With regard to fashion expenditure which includes clothing and footwear, the contribution from Italian was the highest, at 9%, and Swedish people spent the least money on fashion. Ireland, Spain, and Turkey were around 6. 5%.
The table illustrates the cost
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by consumers in three
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categories in 2002 in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey.

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from the data that most money was
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on food, drinks, and tobacco, while the lowest money was
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on leisure and education for all countries. Turkey remained the top spender for food, drink, and tobacco
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as for leisure and education.

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over 32% and
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under 29%
respectively
, whereas, consumer of Spain
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the lowest which stood at almost 19%. Turning back to leisure and education, the contribution of consumers from Spain, Ireland, Italy, and Sweden were at
nearly
2%, more than 2%,
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over 3%, and
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above 3%
respectively
, while Turkey took the top position with
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4. 5%.

With regard to fashion expenditure which includes clothing and footwear, the contribution from Italian was the highest, at 9%, and Swedish
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people
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spent
the least money on fashion. Ireland, Spain, and Turkey were around 6. 5%.

IELTS academic The table illustrates the cost spent by consumers in three different categories in 2002 in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and Turkey.

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