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The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

In the map, three areas A, B and C are selected for Leisure centre. The first proposed location A is located besides the factory area which is sometimes defening and emits a lot of smoke which pollutes the air. Area B is adjacent to residential buildings and suits to community for leisure centre. Whereas location C is a park with mainstream of trees. If we have to choose appropriate place for Leisure centre, the best place is besides residential block as in this way we will not disturb nature very much and will avoid pollution of factory area as well. Among other benefits, dwellers will have easy access to all activities in the centre, by avoiding transport that they have to use in the case if centre is far from their locality. Moreover, if Leisure club is build near city many events can be arranged in the club that people have to think for arrangments in random hotels.
In the map, three
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A, B and C
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Leisure
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first
proposed location A
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besides
the factory
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area
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defening
and emits
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a lot of
smoke which pollutes the air.
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Area
B is adjacent to residential buildings and suits to community for
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leisure
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centre
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choose appropriate place for
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Leisure
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centre
, the best place is
besides
residential block as in this way we will not disturb nature
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much and will avoid pollution of factory
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area
as well
. Among other benefits, dwellers will have easy access to all activities in the
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centre
, by avoiding transport that they
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have to
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in the case if
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is far from their locality.
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Leisure
club is build near city
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many
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events
can
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in the club that
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people
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arrangments
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IELTS academic The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre.

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