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Job occupations between male and females in the UK in 2005

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The horizontal bar chart depicts 9 different jobs and their employees by percentages in 2005 in the UK. Overall, women worked mostly as administrator and secretary as well as skilled trades were mostly occupied by men. Males preferred to work as managers and senior officials, plant and machine operatives compared to females. Furthermore, working as a trader was the most common job among men and their percentages were about 20%. Three occupations, servicing, customer service and secretarial were mainly orientated to females. Their percentages were not less than 12%, especially, about 22% women worked in administrative and secretarial jobs. Only 3-5% of men worked in these occupations in 2005 and it was the lowest rate among these jobs. There were some kind of jobs like professional, technical and catering assistants which were orientated to both genders. For instance, their percentages were almost the same about 12, 14 and 11% respectively.
The horizontal bar chart depicts 9
different
jobs
and their employees by
percentages
in 2005 in the UK.
Overall
, women worked
mostly
as administrator and secretary
as well
as skilled trades were
mostly
occupied by
men
.

Males preferred to work as managers and senior officials, plant and machine operatives compared to females.
Furthermore
, working as a trader was the most common
job
among
men
and their
percentages
were about 20%.

Three occupations, servicing, customer service and secretarial were
mainly
orientated to females. Their
percentages
were not less than 12%,
especially
, about 22% women worked in administrative and secretarial
jobs
.
Only
3-5% of
men
worked in these occupations in 2005 and it was the lowest rate among these jobs.

There were
some
kind of
jobs
like professional, technical and catering assistants which
were orientated
to both genders.
For instance
, their
percentages
were almost the same about 12, 14 and 11%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic Job occupations between male and females in the UK in 2005

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