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The map below shows the changes that have taken place in a seaside area since 1995. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map of a seaside location releases the data about the changes that have made in this area in the years from 1995 to the present. Overall, as can be seen from the maps, the forest park that had occupied a large place and fishing port that was built on the sea, are not there anymore. At the first glance to the pictures, it is obvious that there are great changes in some areas as farmland and forest park which were at the southeast on the map in 1995, but they have been removed, herewith, golf and tennis courts have been constructed. Following that, fishing port which was at the south part of a seaside, is demolished today. Consequently, shops and fish markets have been replaced with restaurants and apartments that are in the southwest part of there. Moreover, the west side has had a housing that is enlarged by constructing a path and building 2 extra houses. There is a car park added nearby the hotel which is at the junction in the southeast part.
The map of a seaside location releases the data about the
changes
that have made in this area in the years from 1995 to the present.

Overall
, as can be
seen
from the maps, the forest park that had occupied a large place and fishing port that
was built
on the sea, are not there anymore.

At the
first
glance to the pictures, it is obvious that there are great
changes
in
some
areas as farmland and forest park which were at the southeast on the map in 1995,
but
they have
been removed
, herewith, golf and tennis courts have
been constructed
. Following that, fishing port which was at the south part of a seaside,
is demolished
today
.

Consequently
, shops and fish markets have
been replaced
with restaurants and apartments that are in the southwest part of there.
Moreover
, the west side has had a housing that
is enlarged
by constructing a path and building 2 extra
houses
. There is a car park
added
nearby the hotel which is at the junction in the southeast part.
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IELTS academic The map below shows the changes that have taken place in a seaside area since 1995.

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4 paragraphs
176 words
7.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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