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In this report we will show the difference and advantages of the student room for two people and one people at the University of Sidney. The room for two people has 6 meters by 4 meters. At this room you will be able to find 2 beds rather than one, as well as 2 study desk. The room comes with a table and chair whenever you want to have dinner. If you want to save some money you will be able to prepare your dinner in full equiped kitchen that is inside the room. the bathroom is inside and you would only have to share it with your roommate. The price per week is 350. The room for one person has 6 meters by 2. 5 meters. It is a smaller room, but you would the opporunity to be by your self with more privacy. It only comes equiped with one bed, one study desk, an equiped kitchen and a private bathroom. The price per week is 200. The advantages of the double room, are the price and the space. You will pay 700 per month for the double room rather than 800 per month for the single room, you would be able to save 100, that you can spend on food or party. The space in room is bigger and even if you share it with someone, you can more places to study or to spend you spare time. In the other hand, in the single room, you would have to pay extra money, but you will have more privacy. You will be able to put your own rules and enjoy a quitter place.

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