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The map below shows the centre of small town called islip

The map below shows the centre of small town called islip e5OKx
The provided maps highlight the changes which will take place in proposed plan of Islip. Overall; as can be seen that the town will change dramatically in terms of recreational and accommodation facilities. One chage is expected to stand out is a ring road around the city. To begin with; the present day main road which runs west to east is estimated to be transformed into pedestrians street. In the north of which shops are going to be demolished and new facilities will be added are bus station and car parking beside the shopping centre. There are plans to built new houses in the north east of the town. Turning to the shops along south side of the street will remain; but the size of park is set to be reduced to built new houses in the southeast corner of city. Moreover all places will be conjoined together by dual carriageway.
The provided maps highlight the
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changes
which will take place in proposed plan of
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Islip
.

Overall
; as can be
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seen
that the town will
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change
dramatically
in terms of recreational and accommodation facilities. One
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chage
is
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expected
to stand out is a ring road around the city.

To
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begin
with; the present day main road which runs west to east
is estimated
to
be transformed
into pedestrians street. In the north of which shops are going to
be demolished
and new facilities will be
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added
are bus station and car parking beside the shopping
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centre
. There are plans to built new
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houses
in the
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north east
of the town.

Turning to the shops along south side of the street will remain;
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but
the size of park
is set
to be
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reduced
to built new
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houses
in the southeast corner of city.
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Moreover
all places will
be conjoined
together by dual carriageway.

IELTS academic The map below shows the centre of small town called islip

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4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
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