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the graph show the percentages and age categories of Netflix customers using various devices in 2014

the graph show the percentages and age categories of Netflix customers using various devices in 2014 7WX3k

The graph illustrates percentages of Netflix customers in the US according to age categories and devices during the year 2014. To summarize, most generation Y use video game consoles to watch netflix while most of generation X and boomers use smart TV to watch netflix. Compared one to another, we can see that blu-ray players had the lowest user base while streaming devices had the second lowest user base. We can also see that video game consoles had the most user base among generation Y between the age of 13 to 34. Smart TVs on the other hand had the lowest user base among generation Y, and if we compared it to generation X and boomers the amount of user base is significantly lower. When we sum up all the numbers on boomers, X, and Y generation usage of video game consoles, smart TV, streaming devices, and blu-ray players respectively. We can see that the boomers generation had exponentially lower numbers compared to generation X and Y.

The graph illustrates percentages of Netflix customers in the US according to age categories and devices during the year 2014. To summarize
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