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The map below show a university campus in 1990 and now. Summerise the information by selecting and reporing the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The map below show a university campus in 1990 and now. e0NG
The map illustrates the changes, which have happened on the university campus in 1990 and now. As for the area to the north of the Administration Building, it has not been transformed significantly. The map demonstrates that here are two vital transformation of Classroom Building 1 and 2. The former has been redeveloped into Humanities Building, and the latter has been transformed into a spot for students majoring in science. Furthermore, Art and Music Building has been introduced in the vicinity of Athletic Fields. It also worth to be mentioned, the territory of Library has been dramatically expended. Taking into account the area in the south secondly, a pond has appeared almost in the middle of the campus surrounded by bike paths. The most noticeable change is that two important objects neighboring to the Athletic fields have been added to the university facilities. I am talking about Recreation building and one additional Women`s Dormitory, which have been built in the East corner of the campus. The final interesting development is bike path leading from the dormitories to the Stadium. Overall, the college campus has been considerably modernized since 1990. New study buildings and one more Women`s Dormitory have been built. Moreover the campus has been decorated both with a pond and bike path.
The map illustrates the
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changes
, which have happened on the university
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campus
in 1990 and
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now
.

As for the area to the north of the Administration
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Building
, it has not
been transformed
significantly
. The map demonstrates that here are two vital transformation of Classroom
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Building
1 and 2. The former has
been redeveloped
into Humanities
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Building
, and the latter has
been transformed
into a spot for students majoring in science.
Furthermore
, Art and Music
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Building
has
been introduced
in the vicinity of Athletic Fields.
It seems that a verb is missing.
It
also
worth to
be mentioned
, the territory of Library has been
dramatically
expended.

Taking into account the area in the south
secondly
, a pond has appeared almost in the middle of the
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campus
surrounded by bike paths. The most noticeable
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change
is that two
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important
objects neighboring to the Athletic fields have been
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added
to the university facilities. I am talking about Recreation
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building
and one additional
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Women`s
Dormitory, which have
been built
in the East corner of the
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campus
. The final interesting development is bike path leading from the dormitories to the Stadium.

Overall
, the college
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campus
has been
considerably
modernized since 1990. New study
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buildings
and one more
The character between 'Women' and 's' is an accent character, not a standard apostrophe character. Use "Women’s" (curly apostrophe) or "Women's" (straight apostrophe).
Women`s
Dormitory have
been built
.
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Moreover
the
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campus
has
been decorated
both with a pond and bike path.
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IELTS academic The map below show a university campus in 1990 and now.

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