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The given vertical bar graph depicts the information about the distinct sorts of accommodation preferred by the British masses in the report of 2005.

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The given vertical bar graph depicts the information about the distinct sorts of accommodation preferred by the British masses in the report of 2005. A cursory glimpse is enough to make it clear that highest London dwellers preferred to live in flats whereas they were less in favour of detached houses. It is manifest that the proportion of flats in London was less than sixty(58%) whereas for Oxford, it was halved to the proportion of London(29%). The fondness of flats in Cambridge was a fifth of the total(20%). The preference of the terraced houses was roughly equal between 16% and 19% for London, Oxford and Cambridge. Moving to the further data, the interest of detached houses for London was less than one-tenth(9%) whereas it was doubled(18%) for Oxford dwellers. By contrast, detached houses was most preferred by one-third population of Cambridge. In case of semi-detached houses, it was quite noticeable that less than a fifth(18%) indigenous of London went for it whereas there was alike proportion for Oxford and Cambridge. Overall, it is thereby clear that detached and semi-detached houses was the housing preferences for Oxford and Cambridge masses.
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was roughly equal between 16% and 19% for London,
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Oxford
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detached
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houses
for London was
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less
than one-tenth(9%) whereas it
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Oxford
dwellers. By contrast,
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detached
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houses
was most preferred by one-third population of Cambridge. In case of semi-detached
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houses
, it was quite noticeable that
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less
than a fifth(18%) indigenous of London went for it whereas there was alike proportion for
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Oxford
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IELTS academic The given vertical bar graph depicts the information about the distinct sorts of accommodation preferred by the British masses in the report of 2005.

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