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The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. Bar Chart

The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. 9O8X

The diagram shows five business sector's share of the economy of Brazil as a percentage from 2009 to 2029. Overall, percentages in 2009 had some fluctuations, in 2019 relatively increased and they are set to decrease in some industries in 2029. The year of 2009 indicates that finance had most share with 31%. Tourism and fuels had equal amount of share with 26%. But nutrition was allocated only just over 10%. In 2019, the numbers gently increased for finance, food and fuels but decreased for manufacturing and tourism. The projection for 2029 is declined percentages for all of industries but monetary and tourist sections. Finance will go to just over 40% and tourism will stay at the same number. The lowest percentage is set to be for manufacturing with only 5%.

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 industries in 2029. The year of 2009 indicates that finance had most share with 31%. Tourism and fuels had equal amount of share with 26%. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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 over 10%. In 2019, the numbers gently
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 monetary and tourist sections. Finance will go to This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 over 40% and tourism will stay at the same number. The lowest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
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 5%. 