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the man-made process which is used to manufacture orange juice

the man-made process which is used to manufacture orange juice PWy1B

The picture given provides information about the man-made process which is used to manufacture orange juice for commercial purposes. Overall, it is clear that the process of orange juice production is complicated and experiences a wide range of stages. Specifically, there are 17 main steps in this process starting with transporting raw material to a factory and ending with dispatching the assumable products. Looking at the diagram in more detail, to begin with, the oranges are transfered to a factory, where they are washed with clean water and extracted to be removed the solid waste using for making animal feed. Following that, the freshing oranges are packaged into bottles before sending to retailers including supermarkets. At the same time, the rest of oranges juice are relocated to a factory where this mixture is evaporated into the concentrated juice, and then, they are canned into cans so as to easily stored them at the warehouse in the optimal condition for a certain period of time. Finally, these cans of concentrated juice and water are mixed together before packageing into bottles and transferring to supermarkets in order to meet the demand of consumers.

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given
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man
-made process which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to manufacture orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 for commercial purposes.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the process of orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 production is complicated
 and experiences a wide range of stages. Specifically
, there are 17 main steps in this process starting with transporting raw material to a factory and ending with dispatching the assumable products.

Looking at the diagram in more detail, to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the oranges are Possible spelling mistake. Did you mean "transferred", the past tense form of the verb 'transfer'?transferredtransferee
transfered
 to a factory, where they are washed
 with clean water and extracted to be removed
 the solid waste using for making animal feed. Following that, the Possible spelling mistake found.fleshing
freshing
 oranges are packaged
 into bottles This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 sending to retailers including supermarkets.

At the same time, the rest of oranges You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
are relocated
 to a factory where this mixture is evaporated
 into the concentrated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
, and then, they are canned
 into cans 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
easily
 stored them at the warehouse in the optimal condition for a certain period of time. Finally
, these cans of concentrated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 and water are mixed
 together This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
Possible spelling mistake found.packaging
packageing
 into bottles and transferring to supermarkets in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 the demand of consumers. 