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The chart below shows the different modes of transportation used to travel to and from work in a European city in 1950,1970,1990.

The chart below shows the different modes of transportation used to travel to and from work in a European city in 1950, 1970, 1990. m1WXd
The bar chart illustrates the different types of transports used to travel in a European City from 1960 to 2000. It is evident from the chart that, car transport was gradually increasing throughout the period, while the other transports were declined. To begin, car traveler stood at just 5 per cent in 1960, which was 5 times less than for the bike traveler, and this was far less than on foot. Apart from a jump to approximately 35% of total travelers in 2000. The next two transports popularity were the similar trend, both were gradually decreasing over the time frame. In 1980, bike and foot travelers were 20% and at about 18% respectively. At the end of the period, both transports were in between 5 to 8% in 2000. Bus popularity spiked to 25 per cent in 1980. Then its popularity decreased the following year, and the bus traveler was 15 per cent.
The bar chart illustrates the
different
types of
transports
used
to travel in a European City from 1960 to 2000. It is evident from the chart that, car
transport
was
gradually
increasing throughout the period, while the other
transports
were declined
.

To
begin
, car
traveler
stood at
just
5 per cent in 1960, which was 5 times less than for the bike
traveler
, and this was far less than on foot. Apart from a jump to approximately 35% of total
travelers
in 2000.

The
next
two
transports
popularity were the similar trend, both were
gradually
decreasing over the time frame. In 1980, bike and foot
travelers
were 20% and at about 18%
respectively
. At the
end
of the period, both
transports
were in between 5 to 8% in 2000.

Bus popularity spiked to 25 per cent in 1980. Then its popularity decreased the following year, and the bus
traveler
was 15 per cent.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the different modes of transportation used to travel to and from work in a European city in 1950, 1970, 1990.

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