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A SURVEY ON ADULT EDUCATION AND THE COSTS INCURRED

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The bar diagram conveys the result on the survey of adult education. The chart exhibits the various reasons listed by the adults as the caused to renew their education again. It is to be noted that a majority of 40% of adults desire to study due to their interest in the subject. Although the majority of adults opted the subject interest as the reason another majority of 38% voted the qualification gain as their reason. It can be deduced that adult education plays a vital role in a person’s current job, since it interferes as a deciding factor for promotion and improving the current status of a job. A fraction of 20% of adults choose the reason of enjoying the learning or studying process. A minority of 12% of adults want education to switch over their current jobs. And a least of 9% person stated their wish to meet new people in their life as their significant reason. The survey also mentions the cost department of the course and people’s review on the sharing of cost. It can be inferred that the majority of cost burden falls on the individual itself. While a Significant amount of people believe the costs incurred in the course should be the responsibility of the employer, minority of 25% voted for the tax payers.
The bar diagram conveys the result on the survey of adult
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education
. The chart exhibits the various
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reasons
listed by the
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adults
as the caused to renew their
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education
again.

It is to
be noted
that a
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majority
of 40% of
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adults
desire to study due to their interest in the subject. Although the
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majority
of
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adults
opted the subject interest as the
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reason
another
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majority
of 38% voted the qualification gain as their
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reason
. It can
be deduced
that adult
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education
plays a vital role in a person’s
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current
job, since it interferes as a deciding factor for promotion and improving the
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current
status of a job. A fraction of 20% of
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adults
choose the
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reason
of enjoying the learning or studying process. A minority of 12% of
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adults
want
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education
to switch over their
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current
jobs. And a least of 9% person stated their wish to
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meet
new
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people
in their life as their significant reason.

The survey
also
mentions the
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cost
department of the course and
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people
’s review on the sharing of
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cost
. It can
be inferred
that the
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majority
of
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cost
burden falls on the individual itself. While a Significant amount of
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people
believe the
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costs
incurred in the course should be the responsibility of the employer, minority of 25% voted for the tax payers.
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IELTS academic A SURVEY ON ADULT EDUCATION AND THE COSTS INCURRED

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
219 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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