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The line graph shows the value of Australia's trade with China, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in billions of Australia dollars ($AUD).

The line graph shows the value of Australia's trade with China, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in billions of Australia dollars ($AUD). 3JXb
The provided line graphs illustrate the information about the value of Australia's trade with three different nations between 2002and 2005. The data is given in billions of Australian dollars. Overall, it is clearly seen that trade with China and the USA showed fluctuation trend over the time period. while, Australia's trade with Japan was constantly increased with time period. Looking at the details, the import and export of Australia with China was almost 2. 8and 1. 5 billions Australia dollars respectively in 2002. After a year, both trade showed opposite trend of $AUD 2 in 2003 which were constantly increase with 0. 3 billions Australia dollars. However, the import of Australia with USA was$AUD 1. 5and it was significant declined before increasing in 2003 having the value of below 2. 5 billions Australia dollars in 2005. furthermore, export from USA with Australia was $2. 5 in initial year. then, there was minor fluctuation showed during the time period having the value of 1 billions Australia dollars. In the case of Japan, the value of trade with Japan experienced on increase to $AUD1. 6 and $AUD 2. 6 in 2004, after hitting a free fall to $AUD 1. Afterthat, it was remained constant at the end of year with same value.
The provided line graphs illustrate the information about the
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fluctuation trend over the time period.
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with Japan was
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, the import and export of Australia with China was almost 2. 8and 1. 5
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Australia
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respectively
in 2002. After a year, both
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showed
opposite trend of
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$AUD
2 in 2003 which were
constantly
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Australia
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, the import of Australia
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in 2005.
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Australia
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. In the case of Japan, the
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with Japan experienced on increase to $AUD1. 6 and
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the value of Australia's trade with China, the USA and Japan from 2002 to 2005 in billions of Australia dollars ($AUD).

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