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The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured

The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured mjnN

The various stages involved in manufacturing instant noodles in the factory using a machine is revealed in the image. Overall, it is an artificial, linear process with several steps, which begins with taking flour from the storage silos and endings with labelling and sealing the product. The first way to start producing a cup of instant noodle is delivering the main ingredients from the barn by truck. After arriving, the flour is mixed with water and oil by rollers to be dough sheets before making dough strips. Following this, it is undergoing noodle discs process, then cooking by oil and drying. After finishing noodle manufactured, the next step is giving a cup as the container, and incuding flavoring such as vegetables and spices. In addition, it is given with labelling and sealing to this product which that as the last way of production instant noodle.

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noodles
 in the factory using a machine is revealed
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begins
 with taking flour from the storage silos and endings with labelling and sealing the product.

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 way to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
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noodle
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before
 making dough strips. Following this, it is undergoing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
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noodle
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 step is giving a cup as the container, and Possible spelling mistake found.including
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 flavoring such as vegetables and spices. In addition
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 with labelling and sealing to this product which that as the last way of production instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
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. 

IELTS academic The diagram shows how instant noodles are manufactured

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American English

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145 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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