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The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK in 2001 and 2008

The bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK in 2001 and 2008 VDLJ

The bar chart illustrates only five percentage of citizents ( who are british) are having fruits and vegetables everyday in the following 8 years from 2001 to 2008. Overall, the women having ratio was the highest over the whole period compared to men and children while children was the lowest. At the beginning of the period, the ratio of the women was just above 20% and than, it increased steadily to reached at the peak of approximately 40% in 2006. Meanwhile, this figure dropped-down slightly at the end of the period. On the other hand, men having ratio was the second position compared with women and children but after 2003, this figure followed the up-ward trend in the UK. Finally, the proportion of the children remained stable in 3 decades (2001 to 2003) and after that it rose gradually and followed the same trend of men.

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children
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 after 2003, this figure followed the up-ward trend in the UK. Finally
, the proportion of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinfanttoddleradolescentjuvenileyouthteenager
children
 remained stable in 3 decades (2001 to 2003) and after that it rose gradually
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men
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