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The line graph shows the sales figures for bananas imported to 4 countries from 1996 and 2004.

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The chart compares the sales of bananas that were imported to four different territories between 1996 and 2004. Overall, it can be seen that the sales of imported bananas experienced a fluctuating trend in all countries during the given time. In addition, the sales of this fruit remained at the lowest level in the USA. According to the diagram with more details, the sales of bananas imported to both France and Japan were at 2 Kg, in the middle of 1995, which was the highest amount. This figure in Japan increased significantly to the peak of 3Kg between 1998 and 1999 before decreasing to merely 2. 3Kg in the middle of 1999; subsequently, reached 2Kg at the end of the period before falling to 1. 5Kg between 2003 and 2004. However, the sales of bananas in France remained at 2Kg in 2004 as well as in 1996 despite some swings during the period. In terms of Germany, selling the imported bananas started at 1. 5Kg the first time, then fell to just over 1. 1Kg after a year followed by witnessing a dramatic increase in the middle of 1997. This figure decreased substantially to 1. 1 Kg after 1 year and experienced a considerable growth to 2 Kg followed by a slight drop to almost 1. 7 Kg. By contrast, the changes in the sales of this kind of fruit were smooth in the USA and just 0. 1Kg growth was calculated in 2004 compared to 1996.
The chart compares the
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of bananas that were
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to four
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territories between 1996 and 2004.

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of
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bananas experienced a fluctuating trend in all countries during the
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of this fruit remained at the lowest level in the USA.

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details
, the
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of bananas
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imported
to both France and Japan were at 2 Kg, in the middle of 1995, which was the highest amount. This figure in Japan increased
significantly
to the peak of 3Kg between 1998 and 1999
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before
decreasing to
merely
2. 3Kg in the middle of 1999;
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falling to 1. 5Kg between 2003 and 2004.
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, the
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of bananas in France remained at 2Kg in 2004
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some
swings during the period.

In terms of Germany, selling the
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bananas
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over 1. 1Kg after a year followed by witnessing a dramatic increase in the middle of 1997. This figure decreased
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to 1. 1 Kg after 1 year and experienced a considerable growth to 2 Kg followed by a slight drop to almost 1. 7 Kg. By contrast, the
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changes
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of this kind of fruit were smooth in the USA and
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0. 1Kg growth
was calculated
in 2004 compared to 1996.
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