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the chart below show the pecentage of different types of west that recycle houshold west 1992 ,1997 and 2002

the chart below show the pecentage of different types of west that recycle houshold west 1992, 1997 and 2002 6aQml
the assigened bar chart illustrates information regarding proportion of household recycled different types of waste in year 1192, 1997 and 2002 At a fleeting glance, it is immensely clear that beginning at 10% plastic waste in 1992, it was inclined to 18% in cans waste in the same year. in 1992, the paper waste ans glass waste was recored about at 15% and 17% Respectively, moving further, in1997, waste of plastic and cans hovered above the 10% however, paper waste was displayed at 31% as against the 28% in glass waste on the other hand, in 2002, the cans waste was recorded at 24% and it was double in term of glass west accounting for 48% in the following year. moreovere, plastic was witnessed at 11% in 2002, and it drastictly increased in paper west accounting for 39% in the year 2002 overall, it is lucid that, glass west emreged as a leader in case of recycled, whereas plastic west displayed least proportion of it.
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