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The line graph shows the number of visitors who visited to a particukar caribbean island in 2010 and 2017.

The line graph shows the number of visitors who visited to a particukar caribbean island in 2010 and 2017. Ednnq
The ostensible line graph details the information about the figure of two distinct kinds of voyagers who had visited to a specific caribbean island, in the consecutive years from 2010 to 2017. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the entire number of tourists was at peak point throughout the years, however visitors who were staying on cruise ships their data was more than from visitors staying on island but in the ending two years, its guests figure was surpassed from cruise ships. Having a clear glance, it can be seen that whole number of travellers was one million, in initial year then, it was continuously increased and reached at peak point until 2017 before, fluctuating minorly in the single period of 2016. Turning to the remaining statistics, it can be witnessed that the figure of sightseers who were stayed on cruise ships was almost 0. 8 million in 2010 and that was remained steady untill 2011, Whilst from that period upward trend was followed by it with 1. 5 million of remained constant from 2012 to 2015. Whereas, excursionists number on island was the least from it, in the subsequent five years, On the contrary in 2016 and 2017 the number of visitors was 2 million for it which was. 5 million higher from cruise ships backpackers.
The ostensible line graph
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caribbean
island, in the consecutive years from 2010 to 2017.

Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that the entire
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number
of tourists was at peak point throughout the years,
however
visitors who were staying on
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cruise
ships their data was more than from visitors staying on island
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but
in the ending two years, its guests figure
was surpassed
from
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cruise
ships.

Having a
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clear
glance, it can be
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seen
that whole
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number
of
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travellers
was one
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million
, in initial
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year
then, it was
continuously
increased and reached at peak point until 2017
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before
, fluctuating
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minorly
in the single period of 2016.

Turning to the remaining statistics, it can
be witnessed
that the figure of sightseers who
were stayed
on
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cruise
ships was almost 0. 8
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million
in 2010 and that
was remained
steady
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untill
2011, Whilst from that period upward trend
was followed
by it with 1. 5
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million
of remained constant from 2012 to 2015. Whereas, excursionists
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number
on island was the least from it, in the subsequent five years,
On the contrary
in 2016 and 2017 the
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number
of visitors was 2
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million
for it which was. 5
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million
higher from
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cruise
ships backpackers.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the number of visitors who visited to a particukar caribbean island in 2010 and 2017.

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