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The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015.

The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015. pNqd
The line graph represents the number of customers visiting four different restaurants from the year 1990 to 2015. Overall, it clearly gives us the idea that Pizza Hut was loved the most in the early days which is actually taken over by the Donut Bro. Whereas the chicken spot was prefered after pizza hut in early days, is not being prefered in the recent times. However Burger Bar was never a preference relatively became a choice between chicken spot and itself. In 1990, Pizza hut was one of the most visited places with aroung 8 thousands customers whereas Chicken spot had only 6 thousand customers but the donout bro which was not a preference among these 3 had only 2. 5 thousand customers and coming to Burger bar which was never opted y the public had only around 1. 5 thousand. As the time passed by, Pizza hut observed a gradual downfall in the business by the end of 2005 and for the next 5 years the customer count was consistent but till 2015 the reduced even more to 5 thousand. Chicken Spot which was just after pizza hut saw a gradual downfal til 1995 and then a drastic increase but later on it went down to least that is around 3 thousand. However Donut Bro which had less customers initially, is one the most preferred place by the end of 2015 with around 8 thousand public and Burger bar which never intreseted much public initially has been gradually increasing over time and has reached arounf 3. 5 thousand which is more than Chicken Spot.
The line graph represents the number of
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customers
visiting four
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different
restaurants from the year 1990 to 2015.

Overall
, it
clearly
gives us the
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idea
that Pizza
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Hut
was
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loved
the most in the early days which is actually taken over by the
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Donut
Bro. Whereas the chicken
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spot
was
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prefered
after pizza
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hut
in early days, is not being
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prefered
in the recent times.
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However
Burger Bar was never a preference
relatively
became a choice between chicken
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spot
and itself.

In 1990, Pizza
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hut
was one of the most visited places with
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aroung
8 thousands
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customers
whereas Chicken
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spot
had
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only
6 thousand
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customers
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but
the
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donout
bro which was not a preference among these 3 had
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only
2. 5 thousand
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customers
and coming to Burger bar which was never opted y the public had
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only
around 1. 5 thousand.

As the time passed by, Pizza
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hut
observed a gradual downfall in the business by the
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end
of 2005 and for the
next
5 years the
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customer
count was consistent
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but
till 2015 the
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reduced
even more to 5 thousand. Chicken
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Spot
which was
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just
after pizza
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hut
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saw
a gradual
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downfal
til 1995 and then a drastic increase
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but
later on it went down to least
that is
around 3 thousand.
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However
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Donut
Bro which had
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less
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customers
initially
, is
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one
the most preferred place by the
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end
of 2015 with around 8 thousand public and Burger bar which never
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intreseted
much public
initially
has been
gradually
increasing over time and has reached
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arounf
3. 5 thousand which is more than Chicken
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Spot
.
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