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The line graph shows the number of bananas important to four nations between 1996 and 2004.

The line graph shows the number of bananas important to four nations between 1996 and 2004. q5Ykr

The ostensible line graph depicts the information about the entire figure of bananas which was imported to Japan, France, Germany and USA over the period of 9 years from 1996 to 2004. Having a clear glance, it can be seen that precisely, 2 USD per kg bananas were imported by Japan and France in 1996. After that, upward trend was experienced by Japan in which imported number of bananas was uplifted by 1 USD per kg (3 USD per kg) during 1998, however France was remained steady with intial number of bananas from 1996 to 1998. whereas, from 1999 zigzag pattern was witnessed by Japan between 2 and 2. 5 USD per kg but after plummeting once in 2003, it was reached at its beginning point in 2004. Varied fluctuation was also faced by France from 1996 to 2002 on the contrary finally, it was steady with 2 USD per kg orderly. Breaking that down, it is further observed that for Germany just 1. 5 USD per kg bananas were accounted in 1996, in contrast before reaching its zenith point in 1998 with over 2. 5 USD per kg imported bananas, it's figure was decreasing slightly in 1997. After, sudden increase in imported number of bananas, it came back as 1997 (1. 5 USD per kg) whilst, imported figure of bananas was increased to Germany from 1999 to 2002 with 2 USD per kg but it dropped slightly in the ending twice years. While, 1 USD per kg bananas were imported by USA respectively in 1986 and 1997 but throughout the years minor upward and downward trend was faced by it under 1 USD per kg. Looking from an overall perspective, it can be readily apparent that most of the bananas were imported by Japan and Germany except remaining nationas.

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