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The diagram shows the process of making instant coffee.

The above diagram illustrates the stages of making coffee. Overall, there are 12 stages in this system. First, coffee beans have been picked by farmers and after that that they expose the coffee beans in to the sunlight to dry it. As the third step, the roaster is used to roast the beans. After that, beans need to cool up to standard level so, freezer is used to cool the beans. For the next stage, beans have been grinded in to small pieces by the grinder. Then the grinded beans have been marinated with hot water. Later on, the coffee pulp is strained and have been froze by the freezer. Subsequently, the grinder is used to grained the frozen liquid. After that, the grinded liquid kept in to dry. And eventually, the dried coffee powder have been poured in to the jars. Initially, we can see that both natural techniques and technology have been used in this process to create coffee powder.
The above diagram illustrates the stages of making
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coffee
.
Overall
, there are 12 stages in this system.
First
,
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coffee
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beans
have
been picked
by farmers and after that that they expose the
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coffee
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beans
in to the sunlight to dry it. As the third step, the roaster is
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used
to roast the
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beans
. After that,
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beans
need to cool up to standard level
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so
, freezer is
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used
to cool the
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beans
. For the
next
stage,
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beans
have
been grinded
in to
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small
pieces by the grinder. Then the grinded
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beans
have
been marinated
with hot water. Later on, the
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coffee
pulp
is strained
and have been froze by the freezer.
Subsequently
, the grinder is
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used
to grained the frozen liquid. After that, the grinded liquid
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kept
in to dry. And
eventually
, the dried
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coffee
powder have
been poured
in to the jars.
Initially
, we can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
that both natural techniques and technology have been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in this process to create
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coffee
powder.

IELTS academic The diagram shows the process of making instant coffee.

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6.0
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