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The line graph provided information on the number of people used Toronto metro system for July 2007

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The line graph provided information on the number of people used Toronto metro system for July 2007. It can be seen from the line graph that the highest number of passengers visit Toronto metro system at 8. am and 6pm. As can be seen at 6 am and 4 pm, the number of passengers is lowest. The passengers used Toronto metro system highest at 8am with about 400 thousand, a similar number of passengers use this subway as 6pm. Atter that the traveler’s number passenger dramatic decrease reach to 200 thousand at 10 am. At 12 pm, the number of passengers slightly decrease reach to about 300 thousand and it steady till 2. pm before significant fall at 4pm. However, the number of passengers steadily increase and reach to 400 thousand at 6pm, from that point, fewer passengers used the metro and at 10 pm the number of passengers used metro about 150 thousand.
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system highest at 8am with about 400 thousand, a similar
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dramatic decrease reach to 200 thousand at 10 am. At 12 pm, the
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about 150 thousand.
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