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Nowadays, everyone has a smartphone

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Nowadays, everyone has a smartphone, tablet, or any other kind of mobile device. And one of the most appealing traits of these devices is accelerating the dissemination of information and knowledge, which means you can grab any news you’re interested in anytime and anywhere. However, mobile devices have also destroyed communication among our friends and family. For instance, when I went out with my friends and had dinner with them, most of us just focused on the tiny little screens on our hands without talking to each other. Moreover, they chatted with each other via Facebook even when they just sat nearby. In other words, these mobile devices have not only improved the quality of communication, well…on the Internet but also have destroyed communication among friends directly. Therefore, I think that we all need to figure out the original intentions that drive us to want to use a smartphone, such as productivity improvement, joyfulness, or merely pursuit of vanity. No matter what the motivation it is, trying not to be obsessed with these gadgets is the most important thing to us.

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