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The line graph iluustrates the development of the number of travellers to some Caribbean island and their preference of accommodation from 2010 to 2017.

The line graph iluustrates the development of the number of travellers to some Caribbean island and their preference of accommodation from 2010 to 2017. ELXMM
The line graph illustrates the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. It also be noted that the total number of passengers experienced an upward trend, the same to the visitors who stayed on cruise ships. However, the number of visitors staying on island remained lowest. Beginning with the number of visitors staying on cruise ships and the number of total, the dominant trend were that they both rose significantly. Began at 1 million in 2010, the number of total started increasing dramatically up to 3 and a half million at the end of 2017. The same to the number of tourists staying on cruise ships while it started just under half billion in 2010, then rose significantly to 2 million. Turning to the number of visitors staying on island, it was obvious that the number of passengers stayed fluctuated. Started at over a half billion in 2010, it rose minimally to 1. 5 million in 2013. Since then, the number of visitors stayed calm during 3 years periods before ended at 1 and a half million in 2017.
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of tourists visiting a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.

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of passengers experienced an upward trend, the same to the
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visitors
who stayed on cruise ships.
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of
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on island remained lowest.

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of total, the dominant trend were that they both rose
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in 2010, the
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billion in 2010, then rose
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on island, it was obvious that the
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of passengers stayed fluctuated.
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billion in 2010, it rose
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in 2013. Since then, the
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stayed calm during 3 years periods
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IELTS academic The line graph iluustrates the development of the number of travellers to some Caribbean island and their preference of accommodation from 2010 to 2017.

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