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The line graph illustrates how many visitors traveled to a particular Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017.

The line graph illustrates how many visitors traveled to a particular Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. pX3oD
The line graph illustrates how many visitors traveled to a particular Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, the total number of tourists increased over the period shown. Additionally, the figure for visitors staying on cruise ships was lower than those staying on island for the first 5 years. In 2010, the total number of tourists traveling to Caribbean Island was 1 million, with nearly 0, 75 million of them staying on island, while the rest chose to stay on cruise ships. Over the next 2 year, there was a small drop in the number of visitors staying on cruise ship to hit the lowest point of roughly 0. 25 million, while the figure for those stayed on island was much higher, at 1. 25 million. In 2017, the Caribbean Island witnessed a sharp rise to 3. 5 million in the total number of visitors. In addition, the number of tourists who stayed on cruise ships jumped to 2 million, surpassing the figure for those staying on the island, at 1. 5 million.
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traveled to a particular Caribbean
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from 2010 to 2017.

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of tourists increased over the period shown.
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visitors
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was lower than those
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for the
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In 2010, the total
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of tourists traveling to Caribbean
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was 1
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, with
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0, 75
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of them
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on
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, while the rest chose to stay on
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. Over the
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to hit the lowest point of roughly 0. 25
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, while the figure for those stayed on
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was much higher, at 1. 25 million.

In 2017, the Caribbean
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witnessed a sharp rise to 3. 5
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of
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.
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of tourists who stayed on
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jumped to 2
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates how many visitors traveled to a particular Caribbean Island from 2010 to 2017.

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