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The Chart shows expected city visits by country of origin for 2018 (Thousands/Year)

The Chart shows expected city visits by country of origin for 2018 (Thousands/Year) APWx3

The given bar chart illustrates the number of visiters will travel to 4 attractions from 3 countries called USA, Canada and Mexico in the year 2018. This is obvious that Marid is expected to be the place that will attract most of the number of travellers from all 3 countries, the opposite is true for proportion of Liverpool which will have least clients. In addition, America will be seen as the country have most people interest in There will be 100 thousands American guests per year in the figure of Marid, compare to 80 and merely 70 thousands people each year from USA and Mexico respectively. In constrast, the tourists will be attracted by Liverpool witness to be much less than Marid clearly. Netly, about 50 thousands Americans prefer Liverpool, which is twice as high as the figure for Canada sightseers reach well over of 25. Mexico will just have a tiny number with just 18 thousands people like travelling there. Looking at the chart in more detail, 80 thousands people from USA will have trips to Roma this year, which is 30 and 60 thousands people higher than Canada and Mexico respectively. Whereas, Paris is expected to have the number of attracted trippers quite similar from all those countries in 2018.

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